Corrections and Additions
Made by the Author in his original copy.
The numbers of the “Notes” correspond with the superior figures in the body of the text.
| ACT I. | ||
| Note | 1 | Changed to 2 in violet pencil. |
| 2 | Lines from 2 to 2 scored out. | |
| 3 | These lines scored out, and “we will have” added. | |
| 4 | This word underlined. | |
| 5 | These lines scored out. | |
| 6 | These lines scored out, “what news to-night?” inserted. | |
| 7 | Lines scored out. | |
| 8 | Altered to “He.” | |
| 9 | Lines scored out. | |
| 10 | Altered to “signal for.” | |
| 11 | Lines scored out. | |
| 12 | Lines scored out. | |
| 13 | Altered to “Be calm, Michael!” | |
| 14 | These words underlined. | |
| 15 | Words underlined. | |
| 16 | Word underlined. | |
| 17 | Lines scored out. | |
| 18 | Words scored out. | |
| 19 | Lines scored out, “from Berlin” inserted. | |
| 20 | Word scored through. | |
| 21 | Altered to “strong.” | |
| 22 | These lines scored through. | |
| 23 | Scored through. | |
| 24 | Altered to “martial law scheme.” | |
| 25 | Altered to “To raise the barricades.” | |
| 26 | Crossed out. | |
| 27 | The word “pause” as a stage direction inserted. | |
| 28 | Lines crossed out. | |
| 29 | Scored through. | |
| 30 | Scored through. | |
| 31 | Word underlined. | |
| 32 | Word underlined. | |
| 33 | Words “Who is there?” inserted. | |
| 34 | Scored through. | |
| 35 | Scored through. | |
| 36 | Scored through. | |
| 37 | Altered to “He has sold us.” | |
| 38 | Word underlined. | |
| ACT II. | ||
| Note | 1 | Lines scored through. |
| 2 | Altered to “you missed.” | |
| 3 | Altered to “profession.” | |
| 4 | Scored through. | |
| 5 | Word scored through. | |
| 6 | Insert “for them to go to.” | |
| 7 | Insert “dining.” | |
| 8 | Altered to “bored to death.” | |
| 9 | Scored through. | |
| 10 | Word underlined. | |
| 11 | Altered to “a.” | |
| 12 | Lines scored through. | |
| 13 | “O God!” scored through. | |
| 14 | Scored through. | |
| 15 | Lines scored through. | |
| 16 | Words scored through. | |
| 17 | Word underlined. | |
| 18 | Word underlined. | |
| 19 | Words underlined. | |
| 20 | Stage direction, “a pause” indicated. | |
| 21 | Altered to “may.” | |
| 22 | Word “I” underlined. | |
| 23 | This speech cut out. | |
| ACT III. | ||
| Note | 1 | “Marat” underlined. |
| 2 | Altered to “Vera. Unmask! a spy!” | |
| 3 | Scored through. | |
| 4 | Scored through. | |
| 5 | Scored through. | |
| 6 | Lines scored through. | |
| 7 | Insert “and quite as unintelligible.” | |
| 8 | Alter “Pres.” to “Vera.” | |
| 9 | Scored through. | |
| 10 | These lines struck out. | |
| 11 | This passage scored through. | |
| 12 | This is struck out. | |
| 13 | Scored through. | |
| 14 | Scored through. | |
| 15 | This speech cut out. | |
| 16 | Lines scored through. | |
| 17 | Lines scored through. | |
| 18 | Cut out this passage and insert “Alexis” after “but.” | |
| 19 | Lines scored through. | |
| 20 | Altered to “No! No!” | |
| 21 | This passage is cut out. | |
| 22 | Insert “Alexis” in place of “him.” | |
| 23 | Lines scored through. | |
| 24 | This speech cut out. | |
| 25 | This passage is scored through. | |
| 26 | The words “no laugh” are inserted here—possibly as a stage direction. | |
| 27 | Passage scored through. | |
| 28 | In place of “the Czar” read “Alexis.” | |
| 29 | Delete this speech. | |
| 30 | This passage is scored out. | |
| 31 | This passage is scored out. | |
| 32 | This passage is scored out. | |
| ACT IV. | ||
| Note | 1 | These three speeches are scored through. |
| 2 | Insert “for the politician.” | |
| 3 | All these lines are cut out. | |
| 4 | Alter to “Gentlemen.” | |
| 5 | Cut out this sentence. | |
| 6 | Words scored through. | |
| 7 | Delete “the crown.” | |
| 8 | Substitute “stop near” for “stay with.” | |
| 9 | This passage is cut out. | |